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]]> By: Untitled – Chapter 1 | Rhex's Translations https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2521 Fri, 12 Jan 2018 22:30:58 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2521 […] Previous Chapter | Next Chapter […]

]]> By: Weekly Update #2 | Rhex's Translations https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2520 Sat, 23 Sep 2017 20:52:36 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2520 […] ← Previous […]

]]> By: Rhexr https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2519 Sat, 23 Sep 2017 08:38:41 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2519 In reply to Rhexr.

First rewrite done. I think it’s a good improvement over the first draft.

]]> By: Slayn Wilder https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2518 Fri, 22 Sep 2017 23:03:46 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2518 Ooohhh!

This a very brutal an interestingvway to start our story…

But, the girl….

And that kid…

….Can’t say I’m a big fan of friends killing eachother…ugh.

NEway, thx 4 the Ch!

]]> By: Rhexr https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2517 Fri, 22 Sep 2017 19:55:05 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2517 In reply to John.

I was hoping for more comments like this. Thanks for the input.

]]> By: John https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2516 Fri, 22 Sep 2017 13:56:30 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2516 Not boring, just where does it go from here? There needs to be a little more detail but that also comes in subsequent chapters. Was a good lead in and don’t be afraid to be more descriptive just don’t go to the level of j.r.r. Tolkien. That is a little much. Lol. Books are also a living organism. They can start rough and turn into a master piece by the end of the tale. Keep up the good work. Will be looking forward to your next chapter.

]]> By: ryouha26 https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2515 Thu, 21 Sep 2017 15:45:04 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2515 In reply to Rhexr.

Okie! (Though you’r picture really can’t make me take things seriously XD)
I’m excited for what will happen~ So Good Luck~

]]> By: Rhexr https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2514 Thu, 21 Sep 2017 15:41:27 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2514 In reply to ryouha26.

Not yet. I’ve got the story all planned out but I don’t want to put anything like that out just in case I decide to change anything major as I write more.

]]> By: ryouha26 https://rhextranslations.com/untitled-prologue/#comment-2513 Thu, 21 Sep 2017 15:30:44 +0000 https://rhextranslations.com/?p=3293#comment-2513 Is there a summary for this one yet? It’s very good in my opinion

Thnx for the chappy~ Nanodesu~

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