Comments on: Atelier Tanaka – Volume 4 Chapter 4 Part 12

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Sun, 20 Dec 2020 00:40:42 +0000

In reply to Detergent. Ester is not a slut she only ever knew one man, who she wanted to settle with. He on the otherhand had dozzens of afairs.

By: CeleryMan

CeleryMan — Sun, 16 Aug 2020 10:05:45 +0000

Tanaka is the true OP MC

By: Stul Stulenko

Stul Stulenko — Sun, 09 Feb 2020 08:14:01 +0000

In reply to RSH4.

She brewed tea with normal water.
The cum-filled is only a bath tube.
There was an orgy, long. Near the bath.

By: Valer v3

Valer v3 — Sun, 02 Feb 2020 17:52:05 +0000

In reply to Chernobyl pickle. i strongly second that

By: Zerephiehell

Zerephiehell — Thu, 12 Sep 2019 00:31:11 +0000

In reply to Detergent. I was thinking the exact same thing. Its time for him to have some character development and notice some stuff. Maybe learn a thig or two and change his point of view to make him compelling. Right now he just seems to be staying in the brainless cockthinking neanderthal mode

By: Bryan

Bryan — Wed, 21 Aug 2019 05:59:23 +0000

In reply to Detergent. Ammmm well....

By: RSH4

RSH4 — Mon, 19 Aug 2019 20:30:22 +0000

Strange. If I’m not mistaken, the idol bitch should be using that water to brew tea, bath, drink, brush her teeth and only God knows what more. Why she was acting all scared, nervous at the likes? Did I miss some chapter?

By: Detergent

Detergent — Mon, 19 Aug 2019 12:52:12 +0000

In reply to diffy2. Slut? It’s not like she was getting boned by many different guys when she was with Allen and we don’t know what she did before she met Allen. And although I agree that Esther acted dumb by going after someone like Allen, a few chapters ago it was made clear Sophie seduced Allen and how Esther was afraid that Sophie would do the same in regards to Tanaka. So, yes, she made dumb mistakes like going after Allen and acting like a bitch to Tanaka when she met him, but I wouldn’t label her a slut.

By: Detergent

Detergent — Mon, 19 Aug 2019 12:33:14 +0000

In reply to Galironl. Don't expect him to lose his virginity until the very end of the story, if he even does lose his virginity.

By: Detergent

Detergent — Mon, 19 Aug 2019 12:11:54 +0000

I am still reading this story because I’ve been reading it for so long, but in my humble opinion the virginity aspect of the main character gets a bit stale. I’m not saying the author cannot keep Tanaka a virgin, but if the author has to keep bringing it up then he should at least delve somewhat more deeper into the MC’s psyche in regards to this issue. It was fun in the beginning, but now it feels like the author simply doesn’t know how to develop the character beyond his virginity.